Wednesday 9 December 2015


The Scrivener Series


On Monday, we had our last Scrivener Session where were treated to a talk and reading by poet and fiction writer Annabel Banks. A great way to end the first terms of the 15/16 year.

Annabel discussed getting published, as well a reading some of her own recently published fiction. Her direct, practical and passionate advice was refreshing and she made clear that the literary world is a wide and wondrous landscape.  Annabel though gave us a compass, a walking stick and a backpack full of cheese.

She advised that if you wish to be a writer and engage others with your work, you have to do two things. First, you need to say clearly who you are. You can do this through twitter, on your own website and to the people you accost on the train and in the street. Second, you need to ask for things: Can I do this? Can I have this opportunity? Will you accept this from me? Will you give me this? It may seem simple, but having the confidence to ask for things can often get you those things.
               
Annabel read two pieces of her short fiction, one which wonderfully tackled the prickly second-person narrative. With her supple prose, she showed breadth in address and style and after each reading, discussed how she placed the piece within the literary landscape.  

After the talk and reading, Annabel took questions from the audience and we then dashed off to the pub for a couple of well-deserved drinks and nibbles. Students gave glowing feedback and got further advice from Annabel in at the watering hole.

My thanks to the very wonderful Annabel! To find out more about her, visit http://www.annabelbanks.com/  

Please keep a look out for our upcoming Scrivener events in the New Year and a happy Christmas to you all.


Dr Craig Jordan-Baker 

Thursday 3 December 2015

The writing voice of Clarice Lispector - Blogpost Assessment - Alex Dinnadge - Alex Pritchard - Melissa Robertson


The writing style of Clarice Lispector

Iconic, different and eccentric are just a few words that help explain the style of Brazilian Writer Clarice Lispector. She is best known for books such as Agua Viva, The Apple in the Dark and Near to the Wild Heart, all of which are constructed using her bizarre but effective flair.

If you are unfamiliar with Clarice Lispector, why not read a profile on her at www.blogs.transparent.com/portuguese/brazilian-profile-clarice-lispector/

Her works seem to have little in the way of traditional narrative structure and tone, for example Agua Viva. It feels a lot like an internal monologue, jumbled, loosely connected thoughts that don’t appear to exist for the sake of the reader’s enjoyment. This, in itself is not necessarily a bad thing, as Lispector’s tone in confident and interesting enough to hold the reader’s interest. She writes for herself, and isn’t concerned with what others think of her work. As a Jewish writer hailing from Brazil she has been compared to Kafka in terms of cultural importance. The fame she has accumulated demonstrates that as a writer, one is capable of freeing their mind and producing fascinating work when you free yourself of reader expectations.

When reading her novels, it is clear that Lispector writes what she thinks and as she thinks it, like a stream of consciousness. This makes her style seem uncensored and personal, as if we are seeing her thoughts translated into words on a page. This is made even more interesting as she has a very philosophical approach. Constantly questioning the world and how she perceives it to be through rhetorical questions and a direct approach to the reader, possibly due to her writing being influenced by French philosophers Jean-Paul Sartre and Albert Camus. One of her most famous quotes states “I can’t sum myself up because it’s impossible to add up a chair and two apples. I’m a chair and two apples. And I don’t add up.” This quote would not look out of place in Sartre’s Being and Nothingness, however it is these philosophical ideologies that allows her work to become captivating. This could be a reference to her pre-mentioned blurred origins or her mental state, however it may also be what controls what she writes and what her novels are based on. I found when reading her works, that there was always more being said than just words. Whether it be her ideology disguised through her stories or concepts that could not just be said with language.

It has been said that Lispector was never really a fan of language. She believed that it was too restricting and instead of being free and creative, we are all just repeating what has already been said. This attitude is clearly displayed through her works as many extracts from her work are not completely sound in terms of grammar and structuring, however they are highly effective in getting across the voice of the reader.

“And she could smell as if it were right beneath her nose the warm, hardpacked earth, so fragrant and dry, where she just knew, she just knew a worm or two was having a stretch before being eaten by the hen that the people were going to eat.”

This rather striking extract comes from her novel Near to the Wild Heart. It is striking for two reasons, the first is that it is a very long sentence, which contains several commas that on the outset look very misplaced and jumbled. Additionally not many people start sentences with ‘and’, which is more commonly seen to be a connective which may tie up both ends of a compound sentence. However the second reason for why this is striking is that what she does in terms of grammar, punctuation and structure works. When reading the text and how it is written, it makes you feel like an improvising storyteller. The stream of consciousness is again visibly in full flow here, but when you see Lispector and her demeanour, you can imagine her telling this and someone just writing what she says and exactly how she says it, for example her pauses and fillers.

(If you are unfamiliar with what Lispector’s demeanour is, I have attached an interview to the bottom of the page for you to watch and enjoy.)

Her distinctiveness and uniqueness is what makes Lispector standout. If you are looking for a book to challenge you and make you look beyond what you are reading, then I definitely would recommend her novels. They make thoughts deepen, brains function and eyes open to what you can achieve through having your own fascinating writer’s voice.

 

Clarice Lispector interview – www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1zwGLBpULs
 








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